I will finish checking all of your writing within the four-day holidays in Tainan and post the comment online if the Internet goes well. Then, I'd like you to count how many errors you make in your written work and compare the number of errors with that of the previous essay. Each time, you have to see how much you improve yourself in English writing.
Here is what I want to say to you at the beginning of the New Year:
Being an English major, you (I) need to have enthusiasm in studying English and using English. I hope to see your (my) improvement one day after another!
My dear, “Happy New Year!”